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she screams

deafening conversations of millions
footsteps and wine glasses of the smart and the dull,
clinking. clinking. laughter.

life
goes
on

she screams

blankets pulled up to comforting warmth
smiles and dreams of the abandoned and the blessed,
whisper. whisper. peace.

life
goes
on

she screams

a hand covers the delicate slopes of her lips
cries and pleasure of the chosen and the thief,
echoes. echoes. silence.

life
goes
on
everyday,
life goes on.
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured here!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal! :heart:
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izha Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow.. thank you for this! :D
i'm sorry i just saw this now. :(
but really, thank you very much. it's kind of late, but this made my day. :D
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome, it was my pleasure :aww: And that's alright :giggle:
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blubbityblub Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful. Congrats on your DLD, i got featured too, it's what brought me to you :) Well done, haunting and achingly sad.
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izha Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. :D
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Mishi5 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Beautiful poetry!
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izha Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much. :D
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lycan-rising Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
interesting.
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izha Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations on your DLD! :)
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izha Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. thank you! :D
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izha Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for suggesting this. :hug:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, this is haunting, and so, so brilliant. Great use of pattern and repetition, in particular. Absolute favourite? "a hand covers the delicate slopes of her lips
cries and pleasure of the chosen and the thief,
echoes. echoes. silence."

Seriously. Brilliant.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I thought as much. It's the perfect example of show, don't tell. I don't understand why writing like this doesn't get more attention.
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izha Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol. then i'll hide that last comment. thank you. thank you. thank you. seriously. thank you. :D you made my day.
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*grin*
Welcome. :)
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